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Jan. 6th, 2010


[info]amy34

Book review: Heartsick

Heartsick, by Chelsea Cain (thriller)

Oh, man. This is one of the most disturbing books I've ever read. It opens with Archie Sheridan, a detective who's been chasing a serial killer for over ten years, being captured by that serial killer--who turns out to be a woman--and viciously tortured.

Then in the next chapter, we skip ahead two years. Archie has somehow survived his ordeal. But he's addicted to vicodin, and his wife and kids have left him. The serial killer, Gretchen Lowell, has been caught and is serving life in prison. Archie visits her weekly, for reasons we don't learn until later in the book.

The book's present-day storyline is about Archie pursuing another serial killer, but the real compelling question, the one that kept my eyes glued to the page, was WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO ARCHIE?

When I read that his wife had left him, I immediately thought the worst of her. He's been through a terrible ordeal, and assuming he's not violent or dangerous (he's not), how can she abandon him to struggle through his recovery alone? But as I read further and learned more details, I realized she had very good reasons for leaving, and I sympathized. I even thought she'd done the right thing.

As for Archie's relationship with Gretchen, the woman who tortured him almost to death, it's tragic and sad and gut-twistingly disturbing.

The book isn't perfect, because the Archie and Gretchen backstory is so much more compelling than the main storyline about the new serial killer. But that backstory sure kept me reading, as did my desire to see Archie grow and recover from his extreme psychological damage.

The writing is top-notch. Let me give you an example, and the key point here is that this example is nothing special or exceptional within the novel. The whole book is like this. Archie is interviewing the teenage friend Maria of a girl who's been kidnapped by the new serial killer.

"'Have you found her?' [Maria] asked immediately.

"'Not yet,' Archie said kindly. Kids were often overlooked in police investigations. The thinking was that they made bad witnesses, but Archie had found that they noticed things that adults didn't. As long as they were interviewed appropriately, assured that they didn't have to know the answers, so they wouldn't make up what they thought the interviewer wanted to hear, kids as young as six could offer valuable observations. But Maria was fifteen. Teenage girls were unpredictable. Archie had never communicated well with them. He had spent most of his teen years attempting to start conversations with girls and flubbing miserably. He hadn't really gotten much better. 'Can we talk to you some more?' he asked Maria.

"She looked at him and her eyes filled with tears. Well, you've still got the magic touch, thought Archie."

The author is entertaining on every possible level. She's advancing the plot, she's giving me some interesting information about child witnesses, she's developing Archie's character, and she's even thrown in a funny line. These paragraphs are doing four things at once! No wonder I was never tempted to skim this novel.

I recommend this novel highly, but be careful--it's not for the squeamish. I felt dirty after reading this novel, not because of any sexual content (there was hardly any), but because it dealt with such cringe-inducing topics as the conflation of violence and intimacy, dependency and attachment, domination and love. And it never struck a false note; every word of it felt absolutely true. That's what's so damned disturbing about it. I was careful not to read this book within a hour of going to bed; I knew it would give me nightmares.

It's part of a series, and I plan to read on. But I'm going to need a palette cleanser first; too many books like this will put me in a funk. A nice Bujold or Brockmann book should do the trick.

[info]charlotterhys in [info]fictionwriters

Looking for a collaborator / writing partner

I write occasionally but I always have a hard time 'sustaining' it because I always get caught up on one detail or something and never move forward. And then I thought that maybe it might work better if I had someone to actually write and work with! Try and get some fresh water in the creative pool.

I am interested in fantasy novels. I am not interested in romantic plotline novels, having a few pairings in the story is okay, but no, you know. Highschool How These Two Kids Got Together, Broke Up, Then Got Together Again stories. I'm good with male / female / young / old / human / nonhuman characters. I am intensely interested in mythological creatures, including things like vampires and shapeshifters. But I base a lot of my thoughts on things like vampires from the original Slavic mythology, which is pretty gross and gory.

I like dark stuff. Not woo woo Goth, I cut my wrists for fun, dark. But interestingly morbid / intense storylines and characters. I'm okay with a lot of graphic situations, I just don't really like smooshy romance.

I'm okay with first and third person perspective, but I'm really picky about first person.

... I think that covers everything! For samples of my writing, I did NaNoWriMo several years ago and I did a series of short stories. http://thirtywords.insanejournal.com/ There they all are. Warning, they're not all edited so it's pretty raw stuff in there. But here's one of my favorites incase you don't want to follow links.

Gypsy )

[info]miketo

Vixen LaPlume, RIP

Our dear, sweet Maine Coon cat Vixen is now waiting for us at the Rainbow Bridge. We love you, Miss Plume.



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[info]spaceoperadiva

Slippery Thing called "Race"

I was poking around various lj coms today and ran into this statement: "If you look white, you're white. End of discussion."

To which I can only say, WTF?

This is great! For those of us who struggle with our own racial identity with ourselves, we now have to deal with other people's random race assignments. Okay, I exaggerate a bit for hyperbole. This has pretty much been going on my whole life, starting with the "That's your Dad? But you don't look like a dirty Injun! Oh yes she does! I'll bet she's got FLIES in her hair and everything!" conversations in elementary school.

Here in South Texas, about 2/3 of the people I meet assume that I'm Hispanic, usually Puerto Rican, sometimes Argentinean, sometimes "Castilian" Mexican. I'm not Hispanic at all, but if I look Hispanic, does that make me Hispanic just like the "you look white. . ." argument of above?

The next thing that usually happens is that random white people start protesting that I don't look Hispanic at all to them. Fine, whatever, thanks for including me in the "us" pile instead of the "them". Point is, random Hispanic people and some others living in South Texas look at me and see Hispanic. Dying my hair various shades of red has had zero effect on this, because lots of Hispanic women dye their hair red or red blonde, because red or red blonde hair makes you more "Castilian". Hidalgo. Not one of those dirty Injuns (aka, my dad).

One of the first things we learn in Anthropology is how slippery Race is, and how much of it really is in the eye of the beholder. That doesn't mean that it isn't a valid thing to talk about, that racial discrimination doesn't exist or any other silly thing. What it does mean is that in this very diverse and multi-ethnic world, deciding Race isn't nearly as straightforward as people wish it was. I suspect the "if you look white. . ." crowd would decide that I'm white and that I shouldn't be discussing this issue from my presumed position of white privilege. Eh, is all I can say to that.

[info]jaylake

[conventions] JayCon X

Mark your calendars now. In celebration of my natal anniversary, JayCon X, my 10th annual 37th birthday party, will be Saturday, July 3rd, from 2 to 5 pm at the Flying Pie in SE Portland. Come help me celebrate both my birthday and my successful completion of six months of chemotherapy in late June.

We're partying because I was born, and because I will have beat cancer. Again.

Flying Pie Pizzeria
7804 SE Stark Street
Portland, 97215
(503) 254-2016
http://www.flying-pie.com/
[ Google Maps ]

As is traditional for JayCon, Paul Carpentier is specifically not invited.


[info]aspiringauthor2 in [info]fictionwriters

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Hi all!  I'm a new user to livejournal, and basically I got this so I could share some of my writing out there and hopefully get some suggestions/criticisms/comments back :)  I'm open to anything you have to say.  So, here's the prologue for the young adult novel I've been working on that I"m trying to get published...let me know what you think!

Title: Innocence (Prologue)

Rating: PG-12/R (cussing is pretty much the only thing bad in here, some violence, but not really)

Plot Key Points: Basic spy novel with a twist--main characters are Alex Weston and Brian Walker, as well as Chandler Poole and Brandon Nabors

Enjoy! :)

Prologue

            Brian Walker crouched on the rooftop of one of the tallest skyscrapers in all of Japan, directly across from the Japanese Embassy. He took off the standard black backpack all CIA operatives carried and took out the three pieces that would assemble his AK-47.

            Brian Walker wasn’t a normal seventeen year old.

            With swift and experienced fingers, Brian locked the three sections into place, reaching into his backpack for his ammunition; finally, he locked his round into the gun and toggled the safety switch off. Brian rolled his shoulders and sighed before reaching into the bag one last time to remove a small earpiece and a large wrapped bundle of cloth.

            Brian put on the small earpiece and immediately his ear was filled with the sounds of his co-operative on the mission, and best friend, Chandler Poole.

            “God this is so boring…why is it that we always get stuck with the boring missions?”

           

Read more... )

 



[info]steelcorpfilms in [info]fictionwriters

Nadya's Nights: Frost (The Holiday Special)

Like the great Doctor Who before me, I decided to do a Nadya's Nights holiday special. Originally, I intended for it to go from December 26th to December 31st with a chapter posted each day and climaxing on New Year's Eve cuz, hey... that'd be pretty rad. Instead, I'm just finishing it tonight. It's gotta few more parts to it than I intended, but that's not a bad thing cuz I think, in the grand scheme of things, it came out pretty awesome.

Anyway, check it out and lemme know what you think.

Nadya's Nights: Frost starts right here:

http://chaoticwritings.wordpress.com/2009/12/27/nadyas-nights-frost-part-one/

Dig it.

[info]mjryan

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[info]cj_ruby

Christmas Haircut

I wrote a few months ago that my mom died of cancer when she was only 44 years old and that I had decided to grow my hair out (three years ago) and donate it to Locks of Love in her memory.


 On Christmas Day my niece, Jessica, who had just attained her Idaho hair-stylist certificate, sheared the ponytail for the donation and then gave me an excellent haircut. Amazingly there was no gray-hair in the braid and it measured twelve inches (You have to donate at least ten, they don't take less).



Here are the pictures of the act. Sorry, none of the new haircut. Wow, My morning routine is twenty minutes shorter, and I won't have to worry about clogged drains anymore.




Here is the braid, now off to West Palm Beach, Florida, to be made into a wig.

 



[info]ogre_san

Serial Obsessions

Slowly accumlating materials for the sword project. I've already made some mistakes, but nothing too costly. It's going to be a learning experience, that much is for absolute.

Yesterday I ordered pieces of water buffalo horn. And was moved to ask Mrs. Ogre "When before in my entire life have I needed water buffalo horn?" I do now. Ah, well. They (the experts on all things) say that new experiences keep the brain healthy.


[info]southernweirdo

The Future of Publishing?

Today, I read this blog post concerning self-publishing (http://www.briankeene.com/?p=3265#comments) and the comments which followed. Interesting stuff.

Yesterday, I read this article (http://booklifenow.com/2010/01/booklife-seven-points-to-consider-when-submitting-short-fiction/) and feel that if you write short fiction you should read it immediately!

What do these two posts have in common? I think they both speak to the changing landscape of traditional publishing, and the myriad of paths authors now have to consider as they progress towards something resembling success.

Here are a trio of related predictions on what will happen in the near future (tongue planted firmly in cheek): 

1)      1) The publishing field is on the verge of experiencing a DIY/Indie style uprising. In some ways this will resemble what happened in the recording industry in the late 80's early 90's. While the big labels conservatively kept churning out big hair bands and cheesy dance music, smaller labels began investing in grunge and indie rock. In that instance, the small labels had a better feel for what would be the future of popular music and cashed in. Small labels continue to be a vital part of the recording industry. Being an indy/small press author or finding a measure of success in self-publishing* will be seen more as a badge of honor and lose all stigma.

2)      2) Due to the continuing decline in our economy, mainstream publishers will become  more conservative regarding manuscript selection. Authors who write things a little different will have to find alternative means of publication, specifically turning towards small presses (and perhaps even a few instances of self-publishing*). Readers, tired of the same old thing from traditional publishers will eventually turn to alternative outlets creating a shift of power. This will all be instigated by point # 3.

3)      3) Nick Mamatas will self-publish the movie reviews from his LiveJournal account and this will become a New York Times Bestseller, sending shockwaves throughout the traditional publishing establishment. Of course, this will lead us back to point #1.

In the meantime, I still think if you want to find any real success, you have to sell your manuscripts through established and well-respected markets. This is why I only send out my finished and traditional novels  to agents and/or reputable/well-known niche publishers at this point in my career.  Same goes for my short stories and poetry. They usually start at the top of the food chain and work their way down with the exception of invites, themed stories, or stories I just instinctively feel would be a good fit with a particular publication. A lot of my submitting (for better or worse) is done based on gut instinct and the amount of respect I have for the particular market in question.

A modern author must realize that -- sometimes -- not everything is right for traditional markets. For example, this strange acid western novel I’m writing right now could be a tough sell to most established markets.  Too weird for most western markets. Not weird enough for most of your horror/fantasy markets. Perhaps magic realism? The narrative is non-linear and surreal. Reality shifts constantly. Could I sell it as literary? Sheesh. I can’t even categorize it myself. Yet, I feel in my bones this may be the best piece I’ve written to date and I’d like to think it will be able to find an audience one day. Perhaps, I’ll seek out nontraditional means of publication for that one? Who knows? I’ll have to research available markets once it is fully finished. The publishing landscape could look completely different than it does today by that point.

If it were finished today, however, it would seem an ideal candidate for a small press project as does my mosaic novel The Fountain at the End of the World, which is a short novel (around 55-56k words) made up of individual pieces of flash fiction about multiple characters with only the background tying everything together. Poetry and short story collections, even when from established and award-winning authors, tend to be small press projects. 
 

All the same, I plan on continuing to pursue traditional means of publication for the vast majority of my written works.  I feel this is in the best interest of my fledgling writing career.

Anyway, I’m starting to ramble (too much caffeine, a lack of sleep, not to mention a wild and crazy two-year-old does this to me, you know).

What are your thoughts on the future of publishing?

*Please note that I believe self-published fiction titles could only be successful if the author is previously published and/or has some kind of built-in audience, much like Mr. Keene suggests in his blog post above.  Even with a built-in audience, I don’t see many self-published blockbusters in the near future. That said, self-publishing may be a nice way to supplement your income if you happen to be a midlist author with a good reputation and a large backlist of out of print novels. Self publishing is not a viable alternative for everyone and should never be taken lightly. The few who succeed through that route work VERY VERY hard at it.

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[info]mmerriam

Rhysling Award

It is that time of year, time to start nominating your favorite speculative fiction poems for the Rhysling Awards, sponsored by the Science Fiction Poetry Association.

If you are an SFPA member and are interested, I have one short form piece eligible this year: "Susan Responds," which appeared in the autumn 2009 issue of Illumen.

I would be willing to email a copy of these to anyone interested. You can reach me at mmerriamATgmailDOTcom.
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[info]fengi

I'm just saying, maybe the mid-80s "Dragon" aesthetic needs a rest.

This is an interesting post debunking the latest non-controversey involving the magazine Realms of Fantasy. What caught my eye is a passing mention about previous controversies involving women on the covers.

For me, the problem isn't just the gender content. It's RoF being stuck in the rigid Frazetta / Brothers Hilderbrand / Heavy Metal / Julie Strain / Etc. which still dominates the genre. If they moved towards, well, anywhere else, the gender content thing might solve itself. There's such a vast range of design and art out which can accomodate the fantastic, some radically different, some a small but significant step. I'd rather see a knockoff of any of the following: Chip Kidd, Carol Lay, Mark Ryden, Remedios Varo, Chris Ware, Lynda Barry, Dave Eggers, Jill Thompsonm Rene Margitte, Molly Crabapple, Charles Burns, ...there's such a vast range of design and art out there - why not change it up?

Hell there's a spectacular fantasy illustrators on livejournal who would easily fit RoF yet be a welcome change, and they'd probably within the magazines budget. I mean, if the goal is to further the cause of the genre, then how about putting out a product which the ever shrinking crowd of people who buy see print as a desirable consumer good will feel excited to purchase? It worked, and still works, for McSweeney's and others. Even the freaking Invincible Iron Man - about as mainstream a comic book you can get - has been changing it up with the covers. So why not Realms?

[info]mjryan

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Today is Little King's 11th birthday. Eleven. I can't believe it's been 11 years since SS turned green in the delivery room and almost fainted. My first baby. *sniff* He's such a sweet little stinky boy. He's the kid that is so sweet and easygoing that you just want to do everything in the world for. Sure, he has his moments of being a royal pain in the ass, but what kid doesn't? (For the record, usually his 'moments' are in response to his little brother being a pest which is a regular occurrence in the MJRyan household.)

I watch my kids and wonder what they're going to be like when they grow up. What kind of job will they have? Who will they fall in love with? I've never been able to come up with a good idea about either. But, with LK, I know he's going to grow up to be the kind of man that will do anything in the world to help people.



Does 11 make him officially a tween? Lord have mercy. I've got to say, I'm dreading the teen years. I'm just not ready for rampant testosterone. Can't I just keep my sweet boy for a few more years? Please? Pretty please?

[info]neo_prodigy

Posted For Truth

Posted for Truth, by none other than one Steve Rogers )

[info]bondo_ba

First Sale of 2010

I've just received the contract which makes my first sale of 2010 official.  "Namug" will be reprinted in the forthcoming anthology Belong: A Place Called Home, from Ticonderoga Publications.  This is excellent news for various reasons.  It marks the first sale of 2010 only six days into the year (a new best for me), and it also marks my first acceptance in Australia, a place which I've been trying to get published in for years.

I am a happy camper today.

Of course, a writer's life isn't all sales and celebration (he says with a straight face).  Yesterday's word count on  the dragon story came to 199 words in total.  Not acceptable by any stretch of the imagination.  But in my defense, I did something more important: I was there for a couple of friends having relationship trouble, so I suppose the universe can forgive the lack of productivity just this once...

[info]cerydwen_ink in [info]fictionwriters

Show Me Who I AM

I've missed you my dear
my love
your razor fingers trailing
down me
my love
my dear
I've missed you
my blackbird
your piercing eyes
on me
my dear
my demon
Oh how i've missed you
judge me lover
polishing your black halo
my darling
smelling my skin like an animal
in heat
do you hunger my love
I hunger for you
for your hated
hand on my throat
my hunter
bring me down with steely arrows
in my back
my heart
fill my lungs with blood
descend on me
smiling
my love
my demon
never let me be and i will
always be yours
my hunter
lover
darling
love me my demon
as I have loved you
bring me down
blackbird
bring me down

[info]spaceoperadiva

Signal Boost: Help an Artist

[info]zhent has some great photos for sale, including some awesome Troopers postcards in a limited run. I hope one set will be mine all mine (as soon as I put money in the bank so that I can spend it) but there's at least a couple other sets up for any other Trooper fans.

Perfect Valentine gift. Really.

[info]sandrawickham

Endings

Since my novel is with my readers, I would like to work on some short stories. I got working on one from a writing prompt from a great book I found called the Write Brain Workbook. I've been so focused on my novel, it's strange to now switch back to short stories! I started writing..but don't know where the story is going, so I'm a bit stuck. So I have a few questions for my fellow writers.

Do you always know the ending BEFORE you start writing?

Or do you at least know what kind of ending it's going to be? (happy, sad, weird, shocking etc) 

If you can't write yourself to an ending do you move on to something else?

At what point, if you can't "find" an ending, do you know a story just isn't going to work?



Thanks everyone.


[info]ajjones

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Nothing sends me into a rage quite like someone trying to stick Jesus in my face. The fucking audacity of it. I don't try to make people see the world as I do, I don't try to make people eat what I eat or read the same books I read or share my opinions, and I respect people's boundaries and their beliefs, even if inside I think they're a kook. Why can't they reciprocate? Do they have any idea how presumptious and disrespectful it is to pull that 'have you heard the good word' crap on someone? How fucking dare you? Keep your religion to yourself unless someone ASKS you about it, you ignorant condescending motherfuckers. I know I'm a good person, and I don't need an ancient book written by men who would sell their daughters for a herd of goats to validate that. Fuck off.


Yes, someone pissed me off. And yes, I have PMS. I'm sure this post will self destruct within 24 hours when it wears off.

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